Thursday, September 18, 2008

Morning

It's early in the morning, Taylor slowly opened her eyes, slowly glancing over at the clock, it's 6:00am, she sits up for a moment and then slides out of bed, she can hear her mom coming down stairs getting ready to come in and wake her up, before her mom gets in the room she slips out the door and in to the bath room; she takes a shower and then hurrys to get dressed.

once she's done she goes threw her back pack making sure every thing is in place, then randomly grabbing a shirt and shorts out of her dresser and throws them in her gym bay along with her volleyball knee pads and shoes.

once she had every thing packed for school she stumbles to the door and quickly opens it and heads to the kitchen for some breakfast. she opens the curbed door and skims threw the breakfast foods, she grabs coco pebbles and a bowl from the dish washer, she quickly porse the cereal in to the bowl and walk to the fridge in search for the milk, she grabs the milk out and porse it in to the bowl on top of the cereal grabs a spoon and starts scarfing it down.

by the time she was done eating she only had 5 minutes until she had to walk to Zack's house to get a ride in to school, she runs to her room grabbing her back pack and gym bay, quickly saying bye to her parent and then hurry ou the door. when Taylor steeped out side there was a little bit of a chill in the air, she noticed how it was darker then usual, and then thought, fall is definitely close, then stared walking, once she reached the field, she examined very were, she could see Zack being a dork and waving at her from the up stairs window.

when Taylor reached the house Zack's dog jumped up on to her almost knocking her over, then she hears voices coming towards her and Zack comes out with there cat in one hand and his back pack in the other, then Taylor grabbed his cat (Stinky pinkie) and put him in the house, then put her back pack in the trunk of the car and went to the back seat and sat down and closed the door behind her, as Zack followed behind her. shortly after his mom steeped out the door and ran to the driver seat and started the car. then we drove down the drive way on our way to school.

3 comments:

Hannah said...

I like you blog its really good!

Mr. S said...

Lots of events but more sensory descriptions would be a good idea for this piece. Also try not using the word "then" so much.

Rachel Sawyers said...

I'm so sad, the 2 german shepards you have are grown up:( They were way cute when they were tiny. It's the one that jumped on you right?
Anyways LOVE this blog!